A Poet's Journey

A Poet's Journey

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A Poet's Journey
A Poet's Journey
At the Surface of the Lake

At the Surface of the Lake

The depths tell another story

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Bob Metivier
Feb 14, 2023
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The Apartments on the Lake- Image by Shawn R. Metivier, 2017
The Apartments on the Lake- Image by Shawn R. Metivier, 2017

It all appears still
At the surface of the lake
’Til you stoop to look

In that moment took
You see the life below, both
Predator and prey

For all is not quite
As pleasant as it might seem
In your placid dreams

By the end of day
One may win, and one may lose
For whom do you pray

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