A Poet's Journey

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Filling in the Cracks

Filling in the Cracks

Worry etched across your face

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Bob Metivier
Feb 03, 2024
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A Song of Brokenness

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Filling in the cracks of this broken vase,
Trying to make some sense of it all;
Looking at the worries etched across your face,
Glancing at the pictures on the wall,

How did we get here,
Where did it all go wrong?
Can somebody make it clear,
Not just some words in a cold, empty song.


I tried so hard to make th…

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