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The Gatekeeper

The Gatekeeper

His taste you should never ignore

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Bob Metivier
May 11, 2023
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An Ottava Rima poem — altered in meter

The Gatekeeper — image by Robert G Metivier, 2023
The Gatekeeper — image by Robert G Metivier, 2023 — Lithia, FL

The gatekeeper knows what he likes
His taste you should never ignore
Saccharine and sweet and as trite
Thinking is too much a chore
Don’t even begin to put up a fight
He’s standing there right at the door
The last one who tried to be free
Was found wearing his h…

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