Are We Overwhelmed
How can we even tell
A poem on existential crisis and social justice

Are we overwhelmed, how can we even tell, what is left to sell to make ends meet, to keep little feet in shoes?
Leaders at the helm are taking us through hell as far as we can tell, in darkness, past the deep with such “tremendous” feats, we lose
Every hope we held, places that we dwell; all faith dispelled, treachery and deceit, raging stories defeat the truth.
Do we feel compelled to risk a prison cell, speak what no one will tell? Might we be so indiscreet, against the excessive drumbeats subdued.
Is it possible to sell the “greatest” treasures non pareil to ever-secret clientele, the never-satisfied conceit of a master class elite excuse?
Are we overwhelmed, what is there to tell, how far from grace we fell? When do we dare to speak tell them that we see the ruse.
For shoes, we lose our truth, subdued; excuse the ruse.
Spiritual necessity vs. physical need. Was this the original design of Creation?
Or was it that all should have life, and have it abundantly? How do we get back to Eden?
We are a very long way from there. It is time to start the journey back, even at great personal expense.
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"For shoes,
we lose
our truth,
subdued;
excuse
the ruse."
—Now, that a song lyric!
It's amazing to see how the shape of a poem guides me to a conclusion I agree with the author on.