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Shawn MetivieršŸ„‚'s avatar

"For shoes,

we lose

our truth,

subdued;

excuse

the ruse."

—Now, that a song lyric!

Nataliia's avatar

It's amazing to see how the shape of a poem guides me to a conclusion I agree with the author on.

Bob Metivier's avatar

Thank you so much for this kind insight, Nataliia!